Rush, Tone Poem for Canvas

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wind opus

pond caress

sand ripple shore

subtle rush finale

(c) Lemuel

15 April, 2018

Form

  • 4 lines
  • L1, 3-syllables, L2, 3-syllables, L3, 4-syllables, L4, 6-syllables.
  • Mimic an opening or closing of some action as in a box or a jar opening then closing; animating a scene; giving extended or curtailed definition to a function.
  • unlimited length

Rush

Rush, Second-helping

Virus Attacks, a Cascade Poem

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They hacked, and they coughed, and they sniffled

poor Ann was caught square in the middle

with a temperature over ninety-eight point one

and fever, the chills, and aches down to the bone.

 

Ann got shots and sprayed loads disinfectants

took vitamins to ward off wayward infections

along with rigorous work-outs at the gym where

they hacked, and they coughed, and they sniffled.

 

She blitzed every bug and disease and infection

with clean eating and sanitizing perfection

if magnets may work she’d employ them but

poor Ann was caught square in the middle.

 

Then, that night Ann began to feel quite queasy

endless coughing, hacking, and loud sneezing

her tissues gave out, the last aspirin was gone,

with a temperature over ninety-eight point one.

 

Ann sees the world though blurred weepy pink eyes

so she called in “sick”, but her boss gave her a surprise

Can she take five or six conference calls at home?

and fever, the chills, and aches down to the bone.

 

©Lemuel

15 April, 2018

 

NaPoWriMo 2018

#NaPoWriMo2018

National Poetry Writing Month 2018

 

Notes

Cascade poetic form

A form invented by Udit Bhatia. I’d like to find out more about the poet. In Cascade poems the poet uses each line from the first stanza of a poem and echoes those lines in the final lines of each stanza afterward. Beyond that, there are no additional rules for much else poem-wise.

I made a poem with four lines. At first the lines just sat on the page. After a little while it worked out (I think, maybe, not so much.) Some claim a rhyming pattern of (ABC deA fgB hiC ) after saying there is not a rhyming pattern. My poem has rhyming. I get it.

 

 

 

 

 

NaPoWriMo 2018, My View

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I make poems and I love a good story.

As with many writing-type people I like to start crafting a poem with an idea, a feeling, or even a title. I truly appreciate the writing prompts or the suggestions being the sort that makes a shared challenge all the more enjoyable. Knowing others are struggling with or breezing through the daily prompt or challenge makes me smile inwardly somehow.

If it is competition, then it’s the good kind; that brings out the best I can make; the funniest, the most somber, the largest word discard pile ever, maybe, even doggerel all of which I have produced with pixel, pencil, and pen.

The number one reason for my first time at participating in NaPoWriMo is learning something new. So, my own challenge is to practice a new or different poetic form with each poem of the month—I don’t think I’ll run out by day thirty. That’s my personal goal for National Poetry Writing Month 2018. I am knocked out by such a great idea like this annual ‘get-together’ to focus on a form of communication as old as civilization, perhaps much, much older.

Ancient cave paintings I think were our first cinemas. Dark places where a little light means so much, sequestered in mystery, how many stories were told there in the flickering lights, moving depictions, imagination sparked from real-life actions, or dreams hoped for etched and painted on magical walls.

We supply the emotion. The poems are our launch pads our magical walls. The prompts offer words and the poets distill them to their essence.

The word-pictures tell about our world, poems release us from the mundane or help us to see it in a new light, or even cast a shadow for contrast and new interest.

When we sleep at night we swim in a shared ocean and watch the cinema of the human mind, both deep immersion.

 

© Lemuel

14 April, 2018

#NationalPoetryWritingMonth2018

#NaPoWriMo2018

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