Being Out-side, Inside, Haiku

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Being Out-side, Inside, Haiku

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In the haiku-moment I get out-side, a little removed from my chores, maybe day-dreaming —I might forget to work.

In the haiku-moment I am breathing in, watching, to catch the words. I want to see the word-picture inside my mind.

I complete my task and make my poem notes. I regret I misplace some haiku along the way. But mostly I see well enough.

Good writing all,

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Lemuel

24 November 2018

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Organised Writing, Haiku

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Organized Writing, Haiku

Writing haiku acknowledges living. I enjoy what helps my time usage. Simple curating keeps messy habits to a minimum.

I like a way to keep the poems handy and organised.

1. Digital or journal, even a stack of index cards work well.

2. I like to record the full date of the haiku.

3. I give organization titles to many haiku—a single word, sometime a little more, but they are just for my impressions of a poem. These temporary titles might be a setting or a feeling or a relationship I wish to exposit in future.

4. As a for instance, haiku with mist/fog/ overcast seasonal words is one way to name my poems.

Organised haiku has a standardised place, includes a date, has a temporary title, and related season relationships.

At a glance I can find what I need.

Best wishes, writing

Lemuel

Right Words, Haiku

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Right Words, Haiku

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Many words can be right or fit a particular haiku.

Composition signifies a process of sorting, of sifting, and then arranging.

As the poem becomes whole, I seek the “only” word to convey the moment.

And I have learned sometimes discovering that only word happens at a time removed from my present task.

But the only word exists. Because haiku exist.

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c. Lemuel

21 November 2018

Over-Writing, A Post Card

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Over-Writing, A Post Card

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Haiku and “short” go together. Sometimes I go off on tangents composing a poem.

Writing short outlines on business cards helps me avoid writing too much poem muck.

Sometimes I make multiple attempts of the same haiku on several cards.

I see many dead-ends and lots of good opportunities too.

Over-writing is my bad habit and it feels great breaking this one.

Now, I almost never over-write, much.

Best wishes, writing

Lemuel

20 November 2018

Before Pre-Writing, Haiku

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Before Pre-Writing, Haiku

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Some haiku are made after a time of reflection.

These are brief Ideas for me before beginning haiku.

Remove distractions or as much as possible set them aside.

Looking and seeing are related functions of the eye. Seeing incorporates my entire response to what I receive from sight. See.

Write in a fluid manner without stopping. Editing is editing.

Offered with a grain of salt,

Cheers

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c. Lemuel

17 November 2018