remembering, dodoitsu*

friends re-living old stories

coffee sharing window booth

stiff gnarled fingers crippled hands

farm labor remnants

c. Lemuel

20 July 2018

*Dodoitsu Poetic Form

  • 4 line poem
  • L1, L2, L3 have 7 syllables
  • L4 has 5 syllables
  • usually about work or love
  • with a little twist of humor
  • mine has a twist too
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