moving day, Dodoitsu

moving day all assemble

take assignments with great joy

diligent work shared complete

bye, mean co-worker

c. Lemuel

06 June 2018

Notes

Dodoitsu Poetic Form

  • 4 lines
  • L1 through L3, 7-syllables
  • L4 has 5-syllables
  • Subjects are love or work
  • Can present a comical twist
  • Syllable count is important feature not so much rhyme

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