First Birthday, a Dodoitsu

She smiled, he smiled first birthday,

Cake, ice cream, party balloons.

Both fell asleep sweet pictures,

Date–same time next year.

(c) Lemuel

03 May, 2018

Dodoitsu

  • 4 lines
  • Lines 1 through 3 have 7-syllables
  • Line 4 has 5-syllables
  • Usually no title. Mine have titles.
  • Main themes are work or love.

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